Lists and Layers

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Recently I was at an event where I spoke with aspiring authors after my talk.

They asked about the number of books I’d written, then they looked both amazed and discouraged at the same time. “How do you get through a book? There’s just so much to think about when you’re writing.”

I told them that I try not to think about the big picture (plowing through 275 pages, editing it, submitting it to my editor, and worried waiting for reviews) as much as possible. It just makes me feel overwhelmed. If I approach the book as simply advancing the story a day at a time (with an idea of where I’m heading and keeping in mind what readers might enjoy most), then it seems like a much smaller project.

Another trick is that I’m not trying to keep everything in mind as I’m writing a book (except reader enjoyment.) I love reading books about writing, magazine articles on writing, and blog posts on writing, but I can’t focus on character arc, story structure, engaging descriptions, and all the other elements that these resources recommend for a good story.

I use layering and lists as tools to make sure I round out my story later. I write my books straight through (without pausing for chapter breaks) and end up with about 55,000 words. This is the bare-bones story. Then I start layering in other elements. This is what I'm doing right now to put the finishing touches on a book I'm turning in at the end of this month.

Layers

Parts of the book that I add in layers for 2nd and 3rd drafts:

• Setting descriptions
• Character descriptions
• Character last names and place names (I’ll mark as *** on the draft so I can find my spots later.)
• Any scenes I was stuck on. I just make a couple of notes about what I wanted to accomplish with the scene and move on to the next scene.
• Subplots can be included perfectly as a separate layer. In fact, it’s almost easier that way because you can just gradually weave them in to the story that’s already on the page.

I do the same thing with revising. If you think to yourself that you’re editing a whole book, the thought of it can be just as overwhelming as writing the book was.

These are issues that I address in layers for the revision (and for a longer list of things I look for during revision, click this post)

• Typos/grammar
• Crutch words that I use too frequently
• Conflict—I make a pass through to make sure each scene either forwards the plot or adds to the conflict
• Continuity (is the character wearing the same outfit on page 20 that she’s wearing on page 21?)
• Subplots—did they resolve? Did they tie into the main plot?
• Loose ends—is everything resolved at the end of the book?

Lists

Somehow, it’s easier for me to come up with lots of different ideas if I make them into bullet points and put them in list form. These lists could include: My protagonist’s catch-phrases. My protagonist’s features. Different physical traits of my protagonist. My protagonist’s facial expressions. *5 possible endings for this book. *5 twists. *5 possible subplots. *5 ways the subplots could tie into the main plot. Or you could do it for character growth: *5 ways the character could grow. *5 surprising things that we could learn about a character. *Top 10 list of things that bother the protagonist (then 10 things that would drive the character crazy that I could write into the book.) *10 things this character loves more than anything. You could find other uses for lists, too: *5 ways to add some unexpected elements to the book (humor, suspense, sadness, fear.) *5 ways to describe the setting.

The best results are woven into the story or used to inspire dialogue that develops my characters more.

These are the tools I use for every book to make sure that I keep things fresh and keep from feeling overwhelmed. How do you keep focused and keep moving ahead with your story?

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Top Tips for Cozy Mystery Writing and a Crazy Cozy Blogfest

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Today I thought I’d move into mystery writing territory for a while and include some of my top tips for cozy mystery writing (some of which will work well with other types of mysteries.)

Today’s post comes a little less than two months before the release of a new cozy series for me and the debut of a new cozy series from my friend Hart Johnson. We thought we’d band together and make a fun blog hop on June 5th) to celebrate our releases and host a giveaway. More information is at the bottom of the post.

What’s a cozy mystery? Cozies, sometimes called traditional mysteries, are a subgenre in a large field of mystery subgenres. They’re primarily defined by their use of an amateur sleuth, lack of gore and profanity, offstage murder, and focus on the whodunit puzzle. These mysteries are frequently (not always) humorous, character-focused, set in small-towns, and are part of a series.

Tips for cozy writing:

The sleuth will be a gifted amateur, but you’ll want to have a police source. Make sure your sleuth has access to some of the same information that the police has—time of death and the potential weapon, for example.

Make sure you’re leaving several clues to the murderer’s identity, but aren’t making them too obvious. The clues need to be scattered throughout the book, but the reader doesn’t need the equivalent of a neon sign pointing out that a clue happened. Find a way to lay the clue but to distract attention from it—maybe another suspect arriving on stage? A sudden argument between the sleuth and another character? Something that seems like a more important clue?

Give the reader a reason to care about the case. Is the victim someone very likeable and innocent and they want to avenge her death? Is one of the suspects wrongly accused and needs to be vindicated? Is the sleuth somehow personally involved or emotionally connected to the case?

Be careful with your number of suspects. Suspect numbers can get a little tricky. You want enough suspects to ensure that the killer’s identity is a surprise, but not so many that the reader forgets who they are. I usually like five suspects, killing one in the middle of the book. One of my editors actually prefers fewer.

Have suspects tell both lies and truths. The sleuth and reader will try to discern which is which. If everyone has something to hide or someone to protect, it creates a lot more conflict in the story.

Consider eliminating the most promising suspect. It can shake up a story in the middle of a book.

Crazy Cozy Blogfest

Now, to help Hart and me with our upcoming releases (and have the chance to win signed books) you can create your own cozy mystery. Except it will be a lot shorter and you don’t have to use any of the tips I included above. :)

Sign up with the Linky tool below, adding your blog to our list of June 5th participants.

Include: 1) Sleuth (age, occupation, maybe a little family info) 2) Sidekick (either friend or foil, but someone who always seems to be around) 3) Setting (town, city, or other sort of place) 4) Theme (go nuts) 5) Twist (be as creative as you like) Write it up in 150-250 words (keeping things short for the blog hop). Please include either our book descriptions or a promo mention or a link to our sites or for buying books.

Click here to enter This list will close in 61 days, 3 hrs, 54 min (6/5/2012 11:59 PM CST

The Azalea Assault Cam Harris loves her job as public relations manager for the Roanoke Garden Society. It allows her to combine her three loves, spinning the press, showing off her favorite town, and promoting her favorite activity. She's just achieved a huge coup by enlisting Garden Delights, the country's premiere gardening magazine, to feature the exquisite garden of RGS founder, Neil Patrick. She's even managed to enlist world-famous photographer Jean-Jacques Georges. Unfortunately, Jean-Jacques is a first-rate cad—insulting the RGS members and gardening, goosing every woman in the room, and drinking like a lush. It is hardly a surprise when he turns up dead. But when Cam's brother-in-law is accused and her sister begs her to solve the crime, that is when things really get prickly. Alyse Carlson: Alyse Carlson is the pen name for Hart Johnson who writes books from her bathtub. By day she is an academic researcher at a large Midwestern university. She lives with her husband, two teenage children and two fur balls. The dust bunnies don't count. This will be her first published book. Links: Amazon Barnes and Noble Indie Bound Confessions of a Watery Tart

Prizes: Hart/Alyse and I will pick our our favorite entries and both winners will get signed copies of both books.

Please help us promote the blogfest by taking the button and banner (thanks to artist Joris Ammerlaan for the buttons) and/or share the Linky Tool below for the blog hop.

Quilt or Innocence Beatrice has a lot of gossip to catch up on—especially with the Patchwork Cottage quilt shop about to close. It seems that Judith, the landlord everyone loves to hate, wants to raise the rent, despite being a quilter herself… But when Judith is found dead, the harmless gossip becomes an intricate patchwork of mischievous motives. And it’s up to Beatrice’s expert eye to decipher the pattern and catch the killer, before her life gets sewn up for good. Elizabeth Spann Craig: Elizabeth writes the Memphis Barbeque series for Penguin/Berkley (as Riley Adams), the Southern Quilting mysteries (2012) for Penguin/NAL, and the Myrtle Clover series for Midnight Ink. She blogs daily at Mystery Writing is Murder, which was named by Writer's Digest as one of the 101 Best Websites for Writers for 2010, 2011, 2011. Links: Amazon Barnes and Noble Indie Bound Mystery Writing is Murder

Thanks, everybody!

Internal Dialogue

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

One of the hardest things for me, starting out as a novelist, was internal dialogue.

Mysteries require the sleuth to mull things over. I really struggled over how to make these passages work. I tried putting thoughts in italics. I tried writing in first person. I tried showing thoughts through the character’s actions and dialogue with other characters.

I must have scrapped fifty or more pages of rotten internal dialogue. It all seemed like it would jerk a reader right out of the book.

I think this is one of those areas where the more we write, the more we get comfortable (and maybe different approaches work with different writers.) I thought I’d share what works for me now:

Deep POV: Deep point-of-view puts readers inside the character’s head for an intimate view of his world. While you’re in this character’s head, you can look at the world through his eyes (noting the kinds of things he would find striking or interesting or irritating or disconcerting and remark on them in that character’s voice and using his vocabulary.) In deep POV, you can also get rid of words like thought, wondered, and knew since the reader understands that they’re reading from that character’s perspective. The reader sees, hears, and notices only what that character would. It’s also a great way to show instead of tell (Her heart pounded instead of Judy was frightened, etc.)

I like fantasy writer Juliette Wade’s checklist for Deep POV. And writer Terry Odell has a quick trick for making sure you’re staying in deep POV:

To "test" yourself: Substitute "I" for "he" (or the character's name) in a scene. Is there anyone else sneaking in there?

Sidekicks: Too much straight narrative usually makes me want to skim, so I try to interrupt it with dialogue when I’m writing. One way to know what a character is thinking is by having that character bounce ideas off of another character…a sidekick. In mysteries, this sidekick can be a Dr. Watson or a Captain Hastings type who actually helps with solving the case, but in your genre, this could be a best friend, spouse, parent, child—you get the idea.

How do you handle internal dialogue? Do you use much of it in your books?

Character-Based Humor

by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

Recently I was asked for tips on writing humor.  My books are billed as humorous cozies and the person emailing me asked if I could share some techniques.

I think that’s a tough subject to tackle, actually.  In person, I have a more dry sense of humor—I’m definitely not that much of a funny person unless I’m telling a story.  When I’m writing, I’m usually working with a particular type of humor…character based.  Let me use Saturday as an example (and we all have days like this.)

I’ve mentioned before that my ten year old daughter is absolutely obsessed with horses.  I don’t share the obsession, but I’m happy to facilitate her horse fixes (to a point!  My husband and I keep insisting we won’t become horse owners.)

She was set on going to the Carolina Cup steeplechase race on Saturday, so I bought a couple of tickets and packed a lunch and we were off.

I knew, though, that the entire situation was fraught with danger.  She was so determined to watch the horses.  This meant that the universe would conspire for her not to see the horses.

And, sure enough, problems arose right away.  The website directions from Charlotte to Camden, SC weren’t clear and took us off in the wrong direction.  I finally turned on my GPS and got us heading in the right direction.  And we ended up getting there fairly late and ended up having to park with the college kids who’d come with their kegs.

Because we’d parked so far away, it was about 3/4 of a mile to reach the main course.  We had to cross the infield and stamp through the tall grass.  As we got closer to the course, the spectators grew older and banquets were laid out with fine silver.  This was all ignored by my daughter, intent on the horses. 

We got as close as we possibly could.  I squinted at the grandstand and asked a staff member, “Can we sit there?  I see seats.  My daughter wants to see the horses.”

“If you have $650 a person.”

I decided we would just get as close as we could aside from being in the grandstand.

Of course, I’d forgotten to bring the folding chairs from the trunk.  I told her to stay put and not to talk to strangers and I trotted back the 3/4 mile to the car.  As I was returning, still running, with the chairs, they closed off the gates to the infield I needed to cross…because the horses were running through.  This, naturally, added another 20 minutes to my trip back…and when I returned she told me in exasperation that a crowd of people had come up to ask her if she’d “lost her mommy.”  They wouldn’t stop worrying over her and coddling her and she’d had a difficult time craning her head to see the course.

Between the bacchanalian shenanigans of the college students who occasionally staggered up to see the horses and blocked our view, friendly and well-meaning spectators who tried striking up conversation with my doll-like-diminutive and grimly focused daughter, I was hiding a smile most of the day.  If I’d been writing a book, these would have been the basic components for a humorous scene: the serious little girl, ferociously intent on the horses and the world working against her.

Character based humor is my favorite kind of humor.  It’s easy to write and doesn’t only create humor—it also makes for conflict (a gentler sort) and character development, too.

Even easier is a comic foil for the protagonist—someone who will put the character in these humorous situations on a regular basis: what we saw in The Odd Couple with Felix and Oscar.

What made Lucy and Ethel’s struggle in the candy factory so funny?  One reason was that they were so earnest about doing well but completely unsuited for the job they were facing. Because they were so serious about making a paycheck, the day’s unraveling and their horror at it, made the situation funnier and funnier.

This is as close as I can come to explaining my approach to humor, but I’m interested in hearing yours.  Do you write humorous scenes into your books?  Have any tips?

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by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

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The Making of a Bestselling eBook Cover: http://bit.ly/HgiOj

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Getting Better vs Being Good: http://bit.ly/FUPmg2 @the99percent

Authors: climbing the walls: http://bit.ly/GGbvpF @Porter_Anderson

Sometimes revision means rewriting: http://bit.ly/GQaXfv @TaliaVance

Are You Committing These E-mail Sins? http://bit.ly/GQb76G @janefriedman

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Profiting Outside Amazon: http://bit.ly/GWHM8x @SarahWoodbury

7 Steps to a Better Blog: http://bit.ly/GWHTAU @DIYMfa

7 Mistakes To Avoid When Writing Your Memoir: http://bit.ly/GWI6nM @danasitar

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Religion in Worldbuilding: http://bit.ly/GWkMcZ @JulietteWade

This is Your Brain on Metaphors: http://bit.ly/GWllnp @creativitypost

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Intriguing adaptations: http://bit.ly/GWlPK5 @Ravenrequiem13

The 5 most common author website mistakes: http://bit.ly/GY2Hcn @authormedia

The Cage, or Why 'No' is Creativity's Greatest Enemy: http://bit.ly/GY2Tsc @cagelessthink

Knowing the requirements for a professionally formatted book: http://bit.ly/GY2WEs @curiosityquills

Ethics vs. Morals: http://bit.ly/GMbBZ3 @writing_tips

Stuck in a Creative Funk? Try These 12 Tricks: http://bit.ly/GMbFb6 @jeffgoins

Questions For Your Beta Readers: http://bit.ly/GMbL2m

Ready to Submit? Check again…: http://bit.ly/GMbMn3 @fantasyfaction

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Writing: The Starburst Method: http://bit.ly/GMPN3v @woodwardkaren

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Writing a Novel: a drama told in three acts, with a prologue and epilogue: http://bit.ly/H1xlhD @SophieMasson1

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How to Read a Book Contract – Can I Ever Get Rid of My Agent? http://bit.ly/GPdIxs @PassiveVoiceBlg

How to Use Pinterest to Market Your Book: http://bit.ly/GPdOoC @writersdigest

Social media and stages of your writing career: http://bit.ly/GPe9Yu @kalayna

The evolving writer: http://bit.ly/GPepGR @sarahahoyt

Strictly Objective Critique Partner: A Helpful Thing to Have: http://bit.ly/H6sxZG @YAHighway

How should Shakespeare really sound? http://tgr.ph/GM73BA @Telegraph

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5 Things The Fiction Query Can Learn From a Nonfiction Query: http://bit.ly/GOedpl @writeangleblog

Tension in publishing is from warring scarcity & abundance attitudes: http://bit.ly/GOelVB @kristinerusch

How to Create Your Own Luck as a Writer: http://bit.ly/GOes3x @deemms for @SouthrnWritrMag

Variety in Character Voices: http://bit.ly/GOeusm @noveleditor

1 reason to write a memoir--as a hymn to the past—and a way to go home again: http://bit.ly/HaYIpw @SaraMTaber

Why Cliches about Translations Hurt Books: http://bit.ly/GUEgsz @pubperspectives

Seth Godin's Poke the Box, Doubt, and the Will to Publish: http://bit.ly/GUEuzY @JFBookman

7 steps to publication: http://bit.ly/GUEC2q @nicolamorgan

Make an Editorial Calendar for Your Blog: http://bit.ly/GUEKim @DIYMFA

Why You Should Kill Your Darlings: http://bit.ly/GUERdO @AdriennGiordano for @KMWeiland

Tips for creating a compelling narrative voice: http://bit.ly/H6Nl1l

Delivering vicarious experience through your story: http://bit.ly/H6NstD @storyfix

The 5 most common author website mistakes: http://bit.ly/GY2Hcn @authormedia

An Agent on Pitch vs The Synopsis: http://bit.ly/H6NHVN

How To Handle A Scathing Review: http://bit.ly/H6NT7q @KrisMcMorris

How to Deal with Writers Effectively in One Easy Lesson: http://bit.ly/H6O8ze @RayGarton

Does Solitude Enhance Creativity? http://bit.ly/H6ODJD @creativitypost

Thoughts on character naming: http://bit.ly/H6OPc2 @catewoods

Authors, What to Do When You're Feeling Stuck: http://bit.ly/GUIws2 @beth_barany

25 Russian Words Used in English (and 25 More That Should Be): http://bit.ly/GUIzV1 @writing_tips

"How to Write a Great Scene, or How Tolstoy Broke My Eyes": http://bit.ly/GSyPev @JulieWuAuthor

Writing Lessons From Downton Abbey: http://bit.ly/GSyXL1 @MichelleGriep

Adding Tension to a Scene: http://bit.ly/GSzpZN @Janice_Hardy

Setting the Scene: Weather: http://bit.ly/GSztZw @fantasyfaction

Characters and (the not so) Lonely Writer: http://bit.ly/GSzvR2 @sarahahoyt

A look at the standard warranty clause in contracts: http://bit.ly/GXe9Bm @PassiveVoiceBlg

Title comps (for book proposals)--make them count: http://bit.ly/GSz49j

Why You Should Kill Your Darlings: http://bit.ly/GUERdO @AdriennGiordano for @KMWeiland

Seth Godin's Poke the Box, Doubt, and the Will to Publish: http://bit.ly/GUEuzY @JFBookman

Hiring an Editor: When, Who, and How to Avoid Scams: http://bit.ly/HmDOqp @AnneRAllen

Writing: The Starburst Method (part 3): http://bit.ly/HmE1tF @woodwardkaren

Past Participial Modifiers: http://bit.ly/HmEoEG

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3 Ways to Improve Writing During Revision: http://bit.ly/HmEBaU @sierragodfrey

Success In Writing, Publishing And Marketing Takes Time: http://bit.ly/HmEIDq @janefriedman for @thecreativepenn

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Do We Need Maps in Fantasy Books? http://bit.ly/GX7U6Y

A closer look at book contracts: http://bit.ly/GX80v9 @PassiveVoiceBlg

Challenging witnesses in crime fiction: http://bit.ly/HjdoaQ @mkinberg

How to Read a Book Contract – Agents and the Law: http://bit.ly/HnoNFC @PassiveVoiceBlg

Nook May Be Expanding Internationally, But Barnes & Noble Stores Aren't: http://bit.ly/Hnp1wn @laurahazardowen

Voice–The Key to Literary Magic: http://bit.ly/Hnp8I8 @KristenLambTX

Description vs. Exposition: http://bit.ly/HnpmPM @DIYMFA

5 Children's Book App Publishing Experts To Watch: http://bit.ly/Hnq6Eh @ebooknewser

Can You Self-Publish Your Way to a Big Deal? http://bit.ly/H05ejc @goblinwriter

Call to action examples: http://bit.ly/H05hM7

A Character-driven Approach to Kissing and Sex Scenes: http://bit.ly/H05n6n @juliettewade

Agent Nouns: http://bit.ly/H05Qp4 @writing_tips

The Learning Curve That Keeps On Curving: http://bit.ly/H05TRG @storyfix

Branding for Writers: An Essential Step to Building Your Author Platform: http://bit.ly/H05Wgo @thecreativepenn

10 Questions to Ask When Beginning a Book: http://bit.ly/H0613L @cherylrwrites

10 Ways Writers Can Use Word More Effectively http://bit.ly/GWTJI0 @CherylRWrites

Online writing tools & downloadable resources for writers: http://bit.ly/H3w0WN @CherylRWrites

How to Get Media Coverage for Your Book: http://bit.ly/H3HMrb @kenbrosky

Writing 50,000 Inimitable Smiles: http://bit.ly/H3I4hL @MargieLawson

So Much Marketing, So Little Time: http://bit.ly/H3ITHA @TalliRoland

How Can Modern Writers Become & Stay Visible? http://bit.ly/H3IXa6 @JodyHedlund

4 tips for writing humor: http://bit.ly/H3J2ux @write_practice

The Way We Read Now: http://nyti.ms/H3JFnP @DwightGarner for @nytimesbooks

Advice for writers on GoodReads: http://bit.ly/H3KAEJ @WriterCrys

Believability & Bending The Law: http://bit.ly/H3KEV7 @juliemusil

Stand up for good self-publishers: http://bit.ly/H3KLjx @byRozMorris

Using Google Search Terms for Fun and Education: http://bit.ly/H3KNIh @JamiGold

How to Find Writing Workshops, Seminars and Conferences in Smaller Markets: http://bit.ly/H3KY68

Bringing back the wonder to SF: http://bit.ly/HsYYnn @sarahahoyt

Ghostwriters Respond to Celebrity Cookbook Expose: http://bit.ly/HsZ5zr @galleycat

Twitter Tips: How to Get Followed Back: http://bit.ly/HsZbHn @AnnieNeugebauer

10 Tips to Launch a Regional Writing Conference: http://bit.ly/HsZT7z @writersdigest

Publishing Industry Terms and Contracts: Some Resources, and Some Advice: http://bit.ly/Ht02aV @victoriastrauss

An agent on typical advances: http://bit.ly/Ht0hmz @rachellegardner

Including faith and religion in fiction: http://bit.ly/Ht0qGm @noveleditor

Target the Heart of Your Book to Write More Easily: http://bit.ly/Ht0y92 @originalimpulse

An agent on pitching: http://bit.ly/Ht1ev0 @greyhausagency

Are Fictional Characters Copyrightable? http://bit.ly/Ht1qdO @DearAuthor

Creating Characters that Pop Off the Page...With Verbs: http://bit.ly/Ht1vOs

What's an Author's Marketing Responsibility With a Traditional Publisher? http://bit.ly/Ht5wTe @averymonsen @joryjohn

Writing songs for fantasy: http://bit.ly/Ht5Dy1 @fantasyfaction

When writers feel like frauds: http://bit.ly/Ht5NFC @bob_mayer

2 things you should know about your book: http://bit.ly/Ht60sr

3 Unique Ways to Incorporate Holidays Into a Novel: http://bit.ly/Ht6dMa @SarahForgrave

"Average and Ordinary" Is Just Plain Boring: http://bit.ly/Ht6kY4 @livewritethrive

Book Design: Points and Picas Primer: http://bit.ly/Ht6teh @jfbookman

2 Ingredients in a Perfect Ending: http://bit.ly/H8YOBQ @KMWeiland

Hitting The New York Times Bestselling List: http://bit.ly/H8YXVY

Keeping It Real in YA: http://bit.ly/H8YZgq @bookendsjessica

Get Your Book in Libraries with a One-Sheet: http://bit.ly/H8Z6sB @beth_barany

A closer look at steampunk: http://bit.ly/H8Zt6f @LenaCorazon for @nicolebasaraba

Craft an Exceptional Elevator Pitch: http://bit.ly/H90uLK @bookgal

Five Tips on Describing Setting (and tips for not going overboard): http://bit.ly/H90Ce2 @Janice_Hardy

Attack Of The Blog: http://bit.ly/Huvg03 @taralain

5 Ways to Get Past that Writer's Block: http://bit.ly/Huvrsk @fictionnotes